My grandmother is the most influential person in my life. She has watched me since I was a baby when my mom and dad are at work. She is always willing to do what we need her to do. she always wants to talk to my cousins and me about what ever. My grandmother always supports us in sports and things that we are proud to show her. She also is very big in volunteering at different events.
The College question is who is the most inflential person in you life?
I am wounderng how I can make this paragraph stand out more. What other ideas should I put in?
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focus more on the direct impact and unfluence she had on you personally and not so much about the other people. since they want to know about you, just talk about that.
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