College Introduction

My grandmother is the most influential person in my life. She has watched me since I was a baby when my mom and dad are at work. She is always willing to do what we need her to do. she always wants to talk to my cousins and me about what ever. My grandmother always supports us in sports and things that we are proud to show her. She also is very big in volunteering at different events.

The College question is who is the most inflential person in you life?
I am wounderng how I can make this paragraph stand out more. What other ideas should I put in?

Writing the College Essay

The college essay is very important because that is the one thing that all the colleges look at. It is very important that your take your time and write well on this essay. All of the sample essays are very focus on there topic. They never go off topic or repeat themselves. Looking at these different samples has giving me an idea on what me college essay should be about.

first post

This is my first post for Mr. Miller's writing the essay class.